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Author Name: Freela-la908 2 Comments
Date Added: April 07, 2013 20:04:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Nature Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Lonely at the beach
The sea gull's are being
aggresive to each other,
you can't hear them though
unless you stop thinking.
 
The sun is on my shoulders,
warming gently.
 
The lazy waves are licking the
surface of my brain.
 
The dog is digging and
anchoring my feet with sand.
He looks reassuringly.
 
I am sitting here under the
blue sky wondering,
how long can I stay.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on April 8, 2013 02:43:32 AM Report

Very nice imagery and expression.

Linda

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 8, 2013 02:26:25 AM Report
WOW. YOU ARE MATURING AS A WRITER...WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?   LAST STANZA IS WHAT I CONTINUALY ASK MYSELF..."HOW LONG CAN i STAY??"  yOU ARE SPOT ON!  LOVE YOUR WORK...KEEP WRITING!  YOUR FRIEND, lINDA JO




 


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