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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 7 Comments
Date Added: April 03, 2013 02:04:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Freedom has come for me...
From within the darkness I come forth
All that remains is the dust that holds together broken down shingles
Of what once was, shall always be.
Hidden is a mystery
Of cobwebs long gone
Desire once hidden
Dreams wasted beyond repair
Moving slowly through the fog.
Can you feel its presence?
The scent of memory we once shared?
Oh how long it has been!
The distant fog-horn of calling hackles sounding forth.
And I strain, my ears picking up its very far-away sound.
Like music from a time gone by
Strains of melancholy running through veins of blood gone dry.
Ssssssssh.....
Yes...
If I listen closely it becomes louder
Like a beam of light, beckoning to me.
And I embrace it,
grasp with all I have within.
Hold it tight to my bossom
Not an inch shall I set it free
For freedom has come.
Yes...
Finally.
 
Freedom has come for me...
 

 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 4, 2013 12:28:31 PM Report

"Like music from a time gone by

Strains of melancholy running through veins of blood gone dry."

 

Sad, haunting, nostalgic and simply elegant...Love it, kid....Len

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on April 3, 2013 02:50:30 PM Report
Brilliant
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on April 3, 2013 12:53:12 PM Report
Enjoyed this very much, well done.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 3, 2013 11:51:40 AM Report


 Life has many pifalls- narrow roads and rock pathways to cross...

WE all stumble  but we must get back up!!  The have freedom we have to let the past stay in the past...   Go forth to your future... Its been a while hope your world is great now...

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on April 3, 2013 04:54:36 AM Report
Nicely written in a way many people can relate to.
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on April 3, 2013 04:37:10 AM Report

Free Verse is a category I have not conquered. You certainly have conquered it beautifully.

I enjoyed this inspirational poem.

Linda 

Comment By: FreeDean on April 3, 2013 03:25:16 AM Report
Freedom is very precious, and so this inspirational poem. Enjoyed it Moonie :) , How are you, and it's been a long time. Hope you are OK, ~Dean 




 


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