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Author Name: Freesatishverma 2 Comments
Date Added: March 18, 2013 23:03:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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DAY OF JUDGEMENT
In last journey he wanted to have 
a free run without rumors 
of reconciliation. 

From years back he watched  
friends, disappeared one by one. He 
became his own enemy. The ravines 

were waiting for the sacrificial throw 
of a bound martyr. 
Between being and action 

he was ready for the kiss of death  
from a ferocious opponent, 
whose chest spread like a hood of cobra  

ready to strike. His ghost will walk now 
on the clouds, days in, days out, 
to read the black lips of blissful time.

Satish Verma
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Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 19, 2013 09:00:44 AM Report

Morning, Sir.  I really liked this write.  Really "felt" the ending.  Have a marvelous week. 

 

Lady D

Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 19, 2013 01:41:20 AM Report

Wonderful use of metaphor in this splendid write.

Linda





 


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