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Author Name: PremiumSunset 4 Comments
Date Added: March 18, 2013 10:03:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Our Inner Hollow

I see all the pain in those brown eyes

Life just isnít fair, itís full of despair

Iím tired of seeing good people get hurt

Tired of all the woman in the mini skirts

 

 

Life can give you so much more

Just grab itís handel and knock down that door

Iím knocking on your chamber door

Once, only once then again nevermore

 

 

Donít ever give up hope

For I too know the pains of crying yourself to sleep

Slipping down that slope

Crying so hard it doesnít make a peep

 

Those nights where you want to give up the fight

When will I find that Mr. Right?

I promise you girl he is closer than you think

If you look through the right lense heís right there when you blink

 

You think I canít see all that sadness you place in front of me

A pretty girl so young should set her heart free

Not end up in chains os sorrow

But we canít see what will happen tomorrow

 

I can hear your heart scream

Oh I can hear that heart scream!!!!

 

Donít ever give up hope

For I too know the pains of crying yourself to sleep

Slipping down that slope

Crying so hard it doesnít make a peep

 

I can see all those scars

Oh I can see all those scars!!!!

 

Stop crying yourself to sleep

Please stop crying yourself to sleep!!!!

 

Donít ever give up hope

For I too know the pains of crying yourself to sleep

Slipping down that slope

Crying so hard it doesnít make a peep

 

Life can give you so much more

Just grab itís handel and knock down that door

Iím knocking on your chamber door

Once, only once then again nevermore

 

 

Nevermore just like Lenore

There is no more tapping on your door

I know this pain hurts

But this too shall pass

 

Stop crying yourself to sleep

Please stop crying yourself to sleep!!!!

 

Donít ever give up hope

For I too know the pains of crying yourself to sleep

Slipping down that slope

Crying so hard it doesnít make a peep

 

Donít ever give up hope

For I too know the pains of crying yourself to sleep

Slipping down that slope

Crying so hard it doesnít make a peep

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on March 20, 2013 12:50:50 AM Report
Deeply moving - well done! - Joe
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on March 19, 2013 02:47:23 PM Report

All you need is some music and mate you are off.....

Very talented writing lyrics

Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 19, 2013 12:25:38 AM Report

Nicely penned lyrics. The title had me expecting different lyrics for some reason.

I enjoyed it very much.

Linda

Comment By: Premiumsammie bagley on March 18, 2013 03:33:18 PM Report
a sad poem perhaps she will listen




 


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