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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: March 15, 2013 10:03:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Water Statue Waves

There where the waves shatter on the restless rocks
echo the endless sound of eternal foam

Magnetic waves bursting into vanishing foam
as they perpetually roll back into the dark
 rumbling waters with natures moan

Salty waves dazzling becoming momentary
water statues after they majestically tower
then just as quickly they collapse
 into the wet sandy loam 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on March 16, 2013 03:59:04 PM Report


The waves crashing against the rocks, raising spray and foam into the air is so cool, I'd like to be under it, becoming one with it. Great job, India.


Len

Comment By: FreeDean on March 16, 2013 08:20:59 AM Report
A great metaphor as always India. You see the life in much deeper level. Loved it, ~Dean
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 15, 2013 11:16:48 PM Report

Splendid and delightful write.

Nature writes are just my cup of tea and this one is wonderful.

I love the thought of the waves becoming statues in the moments before

they crash on shore.

Linda

Comment By: FreeLetra on March 15, 2013 06:10:50 PM Report

i felt as i was there

nice writen

Comment By: Premiumsammie bagley on March 15, 2013 11:42:11 AM Report
i love to watch waves crash into the beach waves are mystical and timeless, thank you for reminding me of natures best a good poem i enjoyed very much 
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on March 15, 2013 10:31:08 AM Report
Nature's beauty - nicely done! - Joe




 


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