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Author Name: Freesatishverma 1 Comments
Date Added: February 28, 2013 23:02:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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WHAT COMPARISON?
The displaced years 
cling 
to your body 
like an extended death. 
I wanted to see 
what could not be seen 
by clutching. 
the lifeless doubts. 

Emotions play: 
potentials are threatened. 
Remaining alert becomes a 
punishment. I grieve for the dementia, 
the night yawns. The walking trees 
start swapping the roots. Folds of sorrow 
whisper of morality. 

The apocalyptic prophecy wants to know: 
"Have you ever seen the hell?

Satish Verma
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Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 1, 2013 12:45:00 AM Report

This write, as most of your others, are thought provoking and leave

me pondering your words. 'The walking trees start swapping the roots.'

I find that line most intriguing but can't say that I fully understand it.

The last two lines of the poem are very effective.

Linda





 


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