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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 4 Comments
Date Added: February 07, 2013 22:02:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
My Heart and Soul
She was different, had a certain tempo when she walked
 

Moving in a particular easy way that you could almost feel

 

The sway from back and forth captured my full attention

 

It was Saturday evening…Ocean Drive…South Beach…Miami

 

I am sure her fragrance slid by me on a soft summer breeze

 

She was made for love…an angel that was sent from above

 

I held her image in a dream…it felt real or so it would seem  

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 8, 2013 06:07:03 PM Report


Your really a very romantic person and when you write its so vivid... Just like a romantic flick!!

 I have missed you my friend!! Hugs ~ India

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on February 8, 2013 02:14:40 PM Report
Very nice flow and tempo! - Joe
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 8, 2013 08:57:53 AM Report

Steve:  lovely and so romantic.   Reminds me of the quote "Let me be your fantasy".   GREAT write. 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on February 7, 2013 11:49:14 PM Report

A clever poem that as a whole is excellent but as an added element each line could be the first line of a yet to be written piece --

 

Great writing Steve --

 

Alistair





 


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