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Author Name: Freependeriki 3 Comments
Date Added: January 26, 2013 14:01:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Nature Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Sentinels in the Mist

On a morning walking
a veil drawn grey
across the Sun
light pale from the East
a scent of rain
droplets in the wind
a softness breathes
across my eyes
a corner turned
and there....
wraiths appearing
sentinels in the mist
they stand
marching down
to shadow
I walk on
the trees disolve
as my footsteps fade

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on February 17, 2013 11:02:31 PM Report

I was browsing the nature category and luckily I came upon this lovely piece.

I enjoyed the read very much.

Linda

 

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on January 28, 2013 04:22:27 AM Report
This evokes memories of when I was a farmer, rising early to morning mists, I miss those days.  Superb work.      Bill 
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 26, 2013 04:35:38 PM Report
This is wonderfully, Tom.  And also wonder-full.  It is magic.  And your words shine and flow like water.  --- David 




 


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