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Author Name: PremiumDr Fogg 5 Comments
Date Added: January 18, 2013 19:01:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Topic Of The Week/Fog Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
The Fog TOTW
 
 
 
 
The fog came down like a grey blanket

It obscured the houses in the distance

And then the vehicle in front of mine

Suddenly I saw a shape but too late.

 

A loud crash, flesh and twisted metal everywhere
My God I have hit a

 

 

 

 

 

  certainly wasn't human?

 

Completely unable to believe what i had seen 

I wandered through deserted streets, the people had run in terror 

        Eventually I returned home to change my pants
The fog lifted somewhat.
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 19, 2013 08:26:54 PM Report


We get some fog here but not much..... WE don't have the moisture!!

GReat poem my dear!!

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeDean on January 19, 2013 11:18:27 AM Report
It can for sure, particularly if you live in a foggy place like we live... well done, very creative right and presentation, ~Dean
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 19, 2013 09:34:11 AM Report
Spectacular use of words and computer magic.  This is great!  Fog is dangerous to the driver.  You should stay inside.  -- David
Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on January 18, 2013 09:32:02 PM Report

Dr. Fogg's diagnosis of fog? This is simply brilliant!

 

~KD~

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on January 18, 2013 09:01:51 PM Report


Clearly....


 


Len





 


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