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Author Name: PremiumDr Fogg 5 Comments
Date Added: November 12, 2012 18:11:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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There They Lie. Poppy
 
 
 
There they Lie.

 

Tommy stood with gun in hand

Upon Armistice Day

The silence he didn’t understand

His comrades all gone away.

 

He spoke softly to his sergeant

"Have we won sarge? Have we won”?

"Yes we’ve won my lad” the sergeant said

"Yes we’ve won, my son”.

 

"But where are all my mates sarge?

Have they gone, have they gone”?

Sarge gestured to the poppy fields

"There they are son, every bloody one.

But we won”.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on November 15, 2012 04:32:27 AM Report
In war no-one really wins...A fitting tribute Bill -- a very touching write -- 



Alistair

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 14, 2012 11:52:48 AM Report


War what has it ever accomplished???


Oh... I could get on a soap box!!

But I will be nice!!!

Comment By: PremiumShawn on November 13, 2012 10:11:08 PM Report

Sadly ironic.

 

Shawn

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 13, 2012 05:04:20 AM Report
Exactly, no on wins in war, the scars never heal
Lovely tender write 

Adri 

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 12, 2012 06:17:42 PM Report
Absolutely beautiful.  Tender.  Vivid.  Clear.  Honest.  Full of irony and feeling.  --David




 


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