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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 6 Comments
Date Added: November 07, 2012 11:11:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Poetry Form Challenges/Week 2: Form Challenge - Triolet Add To Favorites | Text Only
Can I Become a Triolet?

Can I Become a Triolet?

I've never fit myself into this form before —
But it’s always good to try new things —
Yet — a window cannot become a door...
I've never fit myself into this form before —
Can the ocean ever become the shore? — or —
Can words ever give a person wings?
I've never fit myself into this form before —
But it’s always good to try new things.

Author's Notes:
An offering -- in response to the CPAT challenge to write a triolet...  [It's always good to try new things.]
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Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on November 9, 2012 01:17:34 AM Report
...but not always easy to master but that does not include you hence -- you ARE a master -- great job -- 


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on November 7, 2012 09:40:56 PM Report

...can words ever give a person wings??  YES!  writing can be so uplifting to the well as the writer.  Now don't you feel like you are floating??

Nice job on the triolet training!!  You are breaking new ground here....

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 7, 2012 02:38:19 PM Report
Just fantastic. I am not expert but it looks awesome to me :) 

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on November 7, 2012 01:54:45 PM Report

Triolet training....That Bill is a bucket o' chuckles! lol. Good job, Pyro.



Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 7, 2012 12:20:41 PM Report
All you need david is a little triolet training.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 7, 2012 11:18:49 AM Report

Looks like you have it nailed my dear!!

 JUst awesome!!

As always ~|

Love ~ India


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