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Comment By:  She Whispers on November 7, 2012 06:48:48 PM |
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You always write so beautiful.... A pleasure indeed..
The lady is so talented no-one holds a candle to her...
But now look what you did... breathless....
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| Comment By: emma jane on November 6, 2012 11:48:29 PM |
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Time doesn't hesitate
for
even one breath.
Love this line!
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Comment By:  Harry William Harborne on November 6, 2012 05:44:22 PM |
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Well crafted and a joy to read. Bill
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| Comment By: tonya turner on November 6, 2012 05:25:59 PM |
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Beautiful. Good write.
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| Comment By: Adri on November 6, 2012 03:18:47 PM |
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This is marvelous. I really enjoyed it. A feast to read and see
Adri
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| Comment By: Linda Jo on November 6, 2012 03:09:23 PM |
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Dan, incredible job here! This poem wouldn't have been as meaningful... nor as touching if the verses were not repeated. Wonderful! I love the referenced to sand...such a lovely picture of "transient". The Oriental have as part of their definition of beauty...that which is transient. So true...
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| Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on November 6, 2012 12:27:30 PM |
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This mirror-image poem is marvelous. It just 'works.' A joy to read, Dan. --David
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| Comment By: Shawn on November 6, 2012 10:54:16 AM |
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Dan, this is beautiful. Filled with such longing and hope. Great job with the form.
Also, I like the nod to Pamela. She is a sweetheart and does encourage--most appreciated.
Shawn
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