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Author Name: PremiumFirestoneFeinberg 10 Comments
Date Added: November 08, 2012 09:11:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Topic Of The Week/Back in the day Add To Favorites Listen To Poem | Text Only
 
WITH MUSIC mp3 -- Back In The Day -- re-post
bh


Note: These are the lyrics to a song I wrote in April 2009

Note 2: I am re-posting this because I have now (by popular demand) uploaded an mp3 file of me singing the song with synth accompaniment.  




BACK IN THE DAY


Neither novel, neither fiction,
Neither fable, Neither dream
Yes, these things they really happened
In another life they seem...

Suddenly, you know it ended
Time no friend just run away
Yes, these things they really happened
Crying candle, light my way

Back to old familiar places
Back to where the record played
Back to all the friendly faces
Faces gone, that never fade.

Come at night in dream descendent
Come at night as if replay
Yes, these things they really happened
Come at night go back  in the day.







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Comments:
Comment By: Freecolin skilton on November 8, 2012 04:41:39 PM Report


Excellent seems to be too little a word to say David but my goodness its fits beautifully.


Bless you for sharing.


Colin

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 8, 2012 12:59:12 PM Report
This is super cool!  I love it
Adri 

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 8, 2012 10:46:11 AM Report
That was wonderful David, I am not sure if you will get groupies throwing their underwear at you but you never know. I will be flying in on Wednesday next week to start the formation of our group "The wrinkleys" as agreed. Dont forget to book Shea stadium.  Bill
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 8, 2012 09:51:58 AM Report


Goodness what a wonderful song about the past..memories will never fade...

 So glad you reposted this song...

 And sharing the past with us all...

 hugs and love ~ India

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 6, 2012 03:29:14 AM Report
I am dissapointed you didnt upload a file of you actualy singing this. maybe we could form a group? I have a great pair of maracas.
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on November 5, 2012 11:54:55 PM Report
Simply Stunning!!!



Alistair

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 5, 2012 02:21:09 AM Report
Will be a very cool song. Very enjoyable. 
Adri 

Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on November 4, 2012 10:01:41 PM Report
This is excellent my friend! It's a little wistful, and little jazzy, yep, danceable!



~KD~

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on November 4, 2012 07:17:45 PM Report


Nice little ditty, Dave, good rhythm to it. Should have music, dude.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 4, 2012 04:48:07 PM Report
What a lovely set of lyrics.  Oh, yeah, "back in the day" !!!  I have lovely memories --------
Thank you for settin' my fingers snappping and feet a-tappin !!!!




Hugs from Lady D





 


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