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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 7 Comments
Date Added: November 02, 2012 12:11:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Balance Be There...
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10/30/12



A Balance Be There So It Seem


A balance be there so it seem
When one would write in verse
Between the detail and the dream
That neither be the first

To win what might become a race
Should either so to dare
For such result in slightest trace
Of poetry be there.



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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 5, 2012 05:24:42 PM Report


You are just amazing you don't mence words...I enjoy you so much...


I have a lot of reading to catch up so busy theses days~~ Love ~ India

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on November 3, 2012 08:49:22 AM Report
Simply gorgeous --



Alistair

Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on November 3, 2012 06:00:35 AM Report
How you manage to pack so much into so little never ceases to amaze me! Well done my friend!



~KD~

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on November 2, 2012 05:27:20 PM Report
I can see that your mind is filled with deep thoughts David, they transferred very well onto the page too.   Henry
Comment By: FreeAdri on November 2, 2012 03:51:25 PM Report
I like this, swift, to the point and a lot of sense. 
Lovely 

Adri

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 2, 2012 03:11:33 PM Report
Your recent hospital visit has not impaired your brain I see. As for the hurricane I have seen reports of sharks swimming round New Jersey streets It sounds a bit fishy to me though. I think they would be most likely "Loan sharks" what?
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on November 2, 2012 01:03:04 PM Report


Hey Pyro! Howja make out with Sandy? Is everything everything or what? I guess you're cool, cuz you wouldn't be here, if not. I was down for three days and a lot of people here, in Jersey still are out, especially the coastal areas, Sandy really socked it to us! Okay, so it's good to see ya, man, it'll take more than some monster storm to beat us, what? Oh P.S....good write. lol.


 


Len





 


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