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Author Name: Freependeriki 2 Comments
Date Added: October 18, 2012 16:10:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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Old Roads
I have walked old roads this day
that with the dawning dark
became ghosts of my past
and in a Sun's bright glare
were lost and gone forever
this has been my journey
a blink and centuries pass
within a single hour

I have walked old roads this day
on hard and bitter stones
seeking hungers deep and wild
in slowly passing eyes
where the father of shadows
spoke in whisperng darks
of a final path to solitude
and a lost redemptiom

I have walked old roads this day
to a future's cold hard dawn
to watch all our histories lie
in a single grain of sand
where the last chorus fading
echoes down the wind
and the last dreamer waits
for a single futile sign  
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 18, 2012 07:24:06 PM Report


 I have always enjoyed walking you see so much when your walking within its presence....

 Your expression of places always a mystery sometimes...

your visual language is so rewarding to the reader....Like I have said before you could write books!! You just have such a unique  style ...HUgs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumShawn on October 18, 2012 06:48:01 PM Report

Your words are very melodic, entrancing almost. I liked how you used--dawning dark...of my past and future's cold hard dawn. Interesting.

 

Shawn





 


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