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Author Name: PremiumSunset 1 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2012 16:09:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Hey Ichigo Come Get Me Too!
So I hear you got a new boyfriend
I guess he was better than me
I just hope he sticks around till the end
Together I thought we'd always bee

My love is eternal
My love is sincere

I guess life took us for a trip
We've had bad and good
It's a shame we had to jump ship
If I could keep you I would

All I can say is good luck
It's a shame we had to say goodbye
Without you life has just been a muck
I just hope tonight I won't cry

My love is eternal
My love is sincere

I miss you baby
I really really do
But maybe just maybe
You'd fall for me too?

No it's ok bear
I guess he is just better than me
I just pray you too will never tear
Together I thought we'd always be

All I can say is good luck
It's a shame we had to say goodbye
Without you life has just been a muck
I just hope tonight I won't cry

So I bid you farewell
But where the water meets the beach
The water's won't swell
I'll be forever in your reach

My love is eternal
My love is sincere

All I can say is good luck
It's a shame we had to say goodbye
Without you life has just been a muck
I just hope tonight I won't cry
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on September 25, 2012 03:54:10 AM Report
Very sad and moving write, I liked the repetion which enforced the loneliness.   Bill H




 


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