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Author Name: FreeMISS_VEE 3 Comments
Date Added: September 12, 2012 19:09:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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ONCE THE LOVE HAS GONE...

 

Whats left once the love has gone?

That empty space

The place where the heart breaks...

***

An earthquake, vulgar devestation

Find another path

Where happiness will leave less bruises

The soul can be cherished

If only for a brief moment

***

Does there come a time

The second the last ribbon of love unties

Floats like a wilted petal

To lie forgotten on the forest floor...?

***

Items of romance strewn carelessly...from one end of the hallway to the other

Colours faded, dust settled...the fire not hot enough to burn anymore

Random photo album harbouring white dress dreams..still lies...

where it fell, upon the hardwood floor...

***

Pages turn slowly, riffle through chapters untouched

Cold hearts sear with fury, all the tears are not enough...

***

Then, somewhere filled with a howling morbidity are the ones,

The poor souls begging for reprieve

From the rings and the hearfelt promises

Knowing nothing can be done to save this

***

No more screaming, no objects flying, thrown with hatred

Just tired voices, shallow breathing

Notes of those who have given up trying

They know nothing is left

Once the love has gone...

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Comment By: FreeHenry M. on September 13, 2012 07:14:51 PM Report
Though not written as something you are going through, you write as if you were there as it happened. Vee, I agree with what Adri said, you have grown leaps and bounds before our eyes.   Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 13, 2012 03:24:05 AM Report
I can not get over how much your poetry has grown. Don't get me wrong, you have always been a good writer from the beginning, you started as a child. But this is wow. Maybe because I still think of you as the 16 year old girl LOL Happens when you grow up in front of people, and see you maturing, and realizing I am getting older as well... 
In any way, great poetry. I really enjoy reading your writes. 
Adri 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 12, 2012 08:33:30 PM Report


The font to small for me to well .... Getting old I guess...

But you always wrote from your young heart with lifes wisdom!!!

~ She Whispers





 


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