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Author Name: Freedazriz 2 Comments
Date Added: September 10, 2012 04:09:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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every stone that fills my heart cant be taken back
the bitter pills tear apart as red converts to black
the weight it bares apon my soul bends until it breaks
so late repairs will not hold already made mistakes
so hold on tight to what you have it never is to late
its cold at night youl be glad you never tempted fate
you take your chance with my heart every time it bleeds
dont make me dance along a path i cant go where it leads
my will is dark the day is long no other roads to take
so feel my heart hear my song before i bend and break
and above this blue as one will flow as a single ebbing tide
as i love you true this you know and ill never leave your side
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Comment By: FreeSensual Sorceress on September 10, 2012 07:21:27 AM Report
Some nice lines. I'd like to see them punctuated and maybe take the 'so' which you used in two consecutive lines. Still in all, fine.
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on September 10, 2012 04:38:11 AM Report
Thoroughly enjoyable piece with excellent flow and rhymeGraham.


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