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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 7 Comments
Date Added: August 29, 2012 01:08:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Your touch..
Your touch
On fire
Burning through my veins
Like ripples of desire, just driving me insane.

I hold on
Your strength filling me deep within
My heart raises 
Pulse quickens.

I am yours for the taking
My love holds no boundaries
No regrets
Just agony to finally surrender.

Fill me with your need
Your every fiber of being
Love me with all you possess
Your dreams of nighttime feelings.

Grab me and never let go
Tightly to you, within your arms
I am safe, loved, at peace
My will is yours, play me.

Like a violin
An instrument of surreal music
Sounding throughout the night
Then soar me to the heavens, of their true delight.

Together we shall cry out
Our love, wants, needs
Every desire we have held
Shall now be received.

Then slowly we descend
Passion satisfied
Love united
Our moments retired.

Your eyes look into mine
They darken with knowledge
'Love me'
I whisper softly.


You move.....


Your touch..
 On fire...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDean on June 11, 2018 10:08:31 PM Report

A magical touch that puts every reader on fire and takes them on a passionate journey of wants and desire ignited by need for touch...

Your magical pen takes one's breath away Moonie xx

~Dean

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on August 29, 2012 11:37:40 PM Report


I hope this is for REALS...because Moonie doesnt write no fictitious poem!!


 


Girl, this sizzles!!  oh forgot that should be in all caps...lol


 


you are the tops when it comes to romance...uh...poetry that is!


 


well we know how you are spending your nights these days...your secret is out.


 


Incredible piece of writing here...goes right to the senses...Incredible!   


 


ok, just read Len's comment...you got two sizzles.  It's definitely sizzling!!!


 


 

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 29, 2012 04:11:03 PM Report
Oh, my GOD!!...This just sizzles!....Such unbridled passion.....LOvely penning, Moonie...This is romance with a capital RO!....len
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 29, 2012 10:45:48 AM Report
Well now, girl...seems you've set all the fellas on fire here! ROFL! WELL done, well done! I applaud you! :-)
Steamy and totally cooking! And beautifully done!




Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on August 29, 2012 08:48:31 AM Report
I need some cold water fast. It's extremely hot in here. Help!   --David
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 29, 2012 08:08:05 AM Report


Oh my....that was absolutely beautiful, as is the writer of this. Once again and far too seldom, you post a work and grace us with your wonderful verse and romantic passion. Brava, StellaLuna!


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on August 29, 2012 02:23:23 AM Report
Full of passion and desire -- wanting -- need...You never disappoint and I think this is truly a 'magnum opus' -- awesome Moonie --



Much love --




Al





 


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