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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 7 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2012 08:08:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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JUMPY AS A CAT -- Tomahawk's PBC

b’’h
8/24/12
Tomahawk's PBC


Jumpy as a Cat


I am as jumpy as a cat —
I can twirl and I can prance —
Like a comet or a shooting star —
So my darling, shall we dance?

Yes I ran my car off the road —
And then I lost my coat and hat —
I said, "I’ll find them — yes I will —”
(And someone said, "Good luck with that.”)

Dark green eyes, raven haired —
Was she; and I — driven to distraction —
I was in love — but I was scared
To tell her... What reaction

Would she have? ‘Okay,” I asked myself —
"What, me worry?”
Though bewitched, bothered, and bewildered —
I wasn’t in a hurry —

(Like a freight train on Labor Day...)
But nothing else could I think about —
So I said to myself — anyway —
"When in doubt, do without.’








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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 13, 2013 06:33:34 PM Report
You have outdone yourself!! This is just brilliant!!

 Love ~India 
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on August 26, 2012 05:55:28 PM Report
Very funny or not if its you in that situation. Great job on fitting in the phrases.     Bill
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 25, 2012 05:33:07 PM Report
As the daredevil said, "I'm not afraid of dying, but if I ask a woman out on a date, I could get seriously laughed at."....Great job fitting in the requred words, David...len
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on August 25, 2012 04:47:42 PM Report
oh come on...tell her...what have you got to lose??  nice job!  what a story!
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 25, 2012 10:12:07 AM Report


Yes, indeed I am pleased, Dave, this is a masterpiece of simplicity and meaning, great job with the phrases, I couldn't have done it better. Thanx, Pyro!


 


Len

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 25, 2012 09:46:55 AM Report
Loved this.  GREAT expression of emotions.  YOU are an AWESOME writer !!!



Lady D  

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on August 25, 2012 09:39:33 AM Report
A clever construct and beautifully written -- Len will be pleased -- bravo!



Alistair





 


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