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Author Name: PremiumSunset 2 Comments
Date Added: August 11, 2012 15:08:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I hate these nights
It's been so long
Since I've seen your face
I was so wrong
Why has my life been a waste?

No one can take place
No matter how hard I try
As you leave in haste
I am stuck here asking why

I guess were not meant to be right now
But don't think I'll give up
Oh how can I replace you
I still need you somehow

I bet you can tell I hate these nights
All they do is remind me of you

What should I do now?
I cannot move on
 
You were the only thing I ever wanted
I'm sorry but things change
Despite how much we may hate it we've grown up
Were not 18 anymore
 
How I wish I could redo it all
I swear I wouldn't let us fall
But then again
Let's see what God has in store....
Author's Notes:
Finished 3/12/2013 10:15:40 EST
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on March 20, 2013 10:28:13 AM Report
Thank you for finishing this piece....i was not disappointed. You grip the reader from your first line. Well done x
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on March 19, 2013 02:43:47 PM Report
....finish it, it has got me intrigued




 


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