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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 6 Comments
Date Added: August 08, 2012 03:08:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
What is this hold he has over me?
What is this feeling?
This hold he has over me?
Like fire burning through veins open and seeping,
liquid lava running deep inside.
I savor all.
Each searing touch,
engulfing my very essence.
Oh such power he has!
Such complete control.
And I am lost!
Inside all he brings forth
Giving in with such abandonment,
that I can not control myself.
That the very essence of his being
brings forth such need, desire.
To feel his touch?
I would walk across desserts to nowhere.
And his voice...
Oh the sweetness it brings.
Whispering softly in my ear his longing
Desires that I alone he says can only quench his thirst.
The darkness of his eyes hypnotizing me
Holding me in his power.
And I bask in its glory...
This man!
The one who holds me in his power of delight
A power so Strong,
that to fight..
Oh no...
This I can not do.
Instead I walk willingly.
Like a fly to a spider,
deep into his web.
And I wonder....

What is this hold he has over me?
Then wonder no more, as he gently takes me into his arms....


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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 29, 2012 04:16:51 PM Report
You are the undisputed queen of romance and lust for life, kid....Such a great writer you are, Moonie. You sure know how to stir the old hormones!.. :o)...len
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on August 9, 2012 04:58:45 AM Report
Your words have no less a hypnotic effect then the spell you profess to be under for we to are carried along on the winds of romance caressing our egos with the thought of such power that one man should posess, you indeed have a gift and its been a pleasure to share it Moonie~Graham.
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on August 9, 2012 03:35:23 AM Report
What power you have over me...I adore your words -- the rhythm and exquisite vocabulary...I need to see your work in a book so that I can keep it close at all times...You bring words to life and the reader can bask in the emotions you conjure...Excellent as always my very good friend

Much love


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on August 8, 2012 11:55:36 AM Report
Ah.  An ode to passion.  A rainbow.  A dream.   --David
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on August 8, 2012 11:18:43 AM Report
Now this is the Moonie I have come to enjoy and expect such sweet, romantic writings from. i agree with Glata that you should just go with those feelings and let them fly!  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 8, 2012 07:32:18 AM Report

Why Donna, I had no idea you felt that way about me! lmao. Sorry, I couldn't resist, just trying to lighten things up, I know you haven't had the best time of it, for a while, now. : ) How are you, my friend? got someone like that, you're very lucky, indeed, I'm glad for you....mazel tov, Stella Luna! <3




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