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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 9 Comments
Date Added: July 27, 2012 12:07:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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ITíS TRUE I STAYED AWAY FROM YOU

bííh
7/15/12


ITíS TRUE I STAYED AWAY FROM YOU


Itís true I stayed away from you
That I might walk alone ó
For better thought I free myself
To travel on my own.

Yet never in my freedom found
I comfort ó but despair ó
Forsaken inspiration ó gone ó
I found myself nowhere.




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJaveria on October 13, 2012 03:24:16 PM Report
EXCELLENT WRITE.....
Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on August 4, 2012 04:08:25 PM Report
Brings to mind a Beatles tune. Never has desolation flowed so lovely!



~KD~

Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on July 30, 2012 04:56:34 PM Report
I can't begin to discribe the feelings of emotions that reading your creation envoked in me. It to me was like having you here, knowing exactly what I feeling.  Bravo! Great poem! 
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on July 29, 2012 10:37:35 AM Report

You may have felt that way, but it never happens.

Once you've known God,

He is forever in your life whether, or not, you want Him.

He never gives up on you.




Gene

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on July 28, 2012 05:13:38 PM Report


Once again you provide food for thought here David. Humans seem programmed to think they can do things on their own right from toddlers. As we get older we realise the power of a helping hand.


 


Bill Harborne

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 28, 2012 06:38:26 AM Report


In life there are a lot ..If,s

 Some times we have to walk away from who we love more than life...

 As mortals we are always searching for ..Love

 Love is in our heart.... Another brilliant poem my dear...

 Love ~ India

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 28, 2012 01:49:54 AM Report
So much in so few lines and regrets to last a life time,such are the choices that we make and have to live by~Graham.
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on July 27, 2012 12:29:12 PM Report


Like walking on a no-way street, bro!


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on July 27, 2012 12:28:57 PM Report
I committed this cardinal sin with a loved one and lost love and more importantly friendship...  Once again dear friend you produce so much with such brevity -- accurate and beautifully expressed --



Alistair





 


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