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Author Name: Freependeriki 1 Comments
Date Added: July 27, 2012 04:07:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Where You Once Were
My love
what have you taken away
I stand in a cloud of chaos
perceptions unclear now
my pain writhing
once we drank of paradise
untainted and open
but that time of wild desire
is faded now and lost
in a dark night
tears replace passion
love now consumed
in a bitter wind of loss
and where you once were
lie long empty years


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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 27, 2012 03:47:20 PM Report


Thomas....A very sad moving poem that reaches out to why??

Now ....love consummed in a bitter wind of loss

 Where is the passion was it lost with youth?? Empty years ...Wasted years...

My sable eyes moist up....

 I seem to have lost a few years my self!! This hits a few nerves with me as well...

Texas Hugs My Friend  ~ Scarlett

 

 I think most of us feel this way....





 


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