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Author Name: FreeCristian Dolon 2 Comments
Date Added: July 21, 2012 07:07:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Numbers
Ten...
We start explaining to each other once again.

Nine...
Somewhere else we start spending our time.

Eight...
We begin to realize that things aren't going great.

Seven...
We continue arguing everyday until eleven.

Six...
The relationship is getting harder to fix.

Five...
We blindly start struggling to survive.

Four...
We both start to look at the door.

Three...
Our hearts are becoming harder to agree.

Two...
It now all comes down to me and you.

One...
This little love story is almost done...

Now there are only numbers in your head...
And they are still with you even when in bed.

While there's only signs of add and subtract...
But the final equation doesn't come out exact.

I subtract your worse sections...
While you add to my imperfections.

Then I become pieces of your once perfect puzzle...
And you become the powder in my gun's muzzle.

So now we starting numbering all our errors...
Because our relationship is becoming nightmare terrors.

But if you ever get to zero...
It all ends and we have to go.

Ten...
We try to fix everything now and then.

Nine...
We are on the verge of crossing the line.

Eight...
It's starting to get pretty late.

Seven...
We'll starting to forget about our love in heaven.

Six...
It could be separation what our destiny picks...

Five...
The moment of truth is about to finally arrive.

Four...
We're still found trying to settle the score.

Three...
We noticed that our relationship never had a warranty.

Two...
Our decisions ends up in only a few.

One...
We just get closer to none.

Here we start changing lies to what was once true...
Even the very things we never even thought we knew.

While I stay angry at home...
You're walking outside in a mindless roam.

We try to find out better details...
But even that also just fails.

Now we're beginning to not feel the same...
Our love is about to end up in a memory pictured frame.

It seems that the flame is about to burn out...
All is at a lost no matter where we scout.

Oh yeah, we're hitting zero...
In this love story there's no hereon of hero.

So I leave...
You leave...
Me and you leave...
We both just leave.
Author's Notes:
Once you hit zero... It's over.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 21, 2012 04:36:41 PM Report


Sadness I felt reading this....

Yes I think we all get burnt out and when its over

its just over Time to move on..

 Know exactly how you feel....

 GReat to read your work again...

Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on July 21, 2012 01:45:05 PM Report
I like this. I know that you put a lot of heart, mind, and effort in this but it was well worth it   J.




 


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