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Author Name: Freedazriz 2 Comments
Date Added: July 05, 2012 22:07:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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noisy toys and building bricks
noisy toys and building bricks
girls and boys in football kits
playground fights homework books
summer nights disprooving looks
growing pains and butterflies
test and gains that qualify
leaving school hunting work
breaking rules going berserk
frequenting pubs getting drunk
discover love and have a bunk
find a spouse and settle down
buy a house outside of town
have some kids start to fight
hit the skids stay out all night
get divorced loose your job
feel remorse become a snob
find yourself loose the weight
discover wealth start to date
love again this time for real
hide the pain but start to feel
watch your kids have there own
building bricks and a noisy zone
grow too old and then retire
feel the cold and loose the fire
close your eyes then drift away
as life dies the memories play
of all the joys the one that sticks
is noisy toys and building bricks
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Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on July 6, 2012 08:20:49 AM Report
Brilliant, Darren!  Thoroughly enjoyable.  You grow.   --David
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on July 6, 2012 06:01:17 AM Report


What a delightful poem, it just about sums up life for most of us, I enjoyed the rhyme and flow of this well written poem.


 


Bill Harborne





 


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