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Author Name: Freependeriki 3 Comments
Date Added: July 05, 2012 06:07:24 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Words of Darkness
you spin your words
this poetry of dark promise
and I am captivated
lost in the whispered rhyme
my soul awakens
and I see illuminated
a moonlit spine of crags
do you await me there
holding promise in a kiss
where blood flows
down a river of clay
and do you stand
before an alter stone
imprecations
and words uttered
to a bane of winds
and will I fall before you
and beg forgiveness
even as your hooded eyes
sear my inner scape
and call me home


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Comment By: PremiumHOPE on July 8, 2012 09:12:38 PM Report
Thomas
beautifully written, which I believe also inspired She, to write two of her very own.  I don't see a woman but many religious  undertones.  Clay = which we were made off?    Blood = blood of Christ,  the sea of blood revelations?, the sacrifies of the lamb,= passover. We all wonder about those demons and ghosts in ours lives and on that day will they too be there?  I know that God is a forgiving God, and if I ask for it forgiveness is mine.  I wrestle with this concept but I'm afraid it is I that has to forgive myself, which I don't know is possible.  A deep thought provoking piece.

Love

Hope

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 6, 2012 02:52:28 AM Report
Darkly romantic in a somewhat mysterious way yet ca compelling read~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 5, 2012 01:33:52 PM Report


Interesting play of words that speak out in Questions ..

At first I think its about a woman ....Who moves your heart ..??

yet the words to you seem to be darkness?? Yet you want forgiveness...

from what I wondered??? Yet is she calling you home???

A compelling poem that to me could mean a couple of things....??

You are indeed the mystery man.....*****

 Always ~ Scarlett

You have your poem in general....





 


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