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Author Name: Freedazriz 4 Comments
Date Added: June 14, 2012 07:06:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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kaleidoscope

if anyone could read my mind

a story would be told

a kaleidoscope world your find

where secrets will unfold

the basic truth within my soul

laid bare for all to see

perpetual thoughts devine of you

the kind that sets you free

deeper than the blueist ocean

yet filled upon eternity

set like steel in pure devotion

as calm as lifes serenity

a smile upon my hearts design

to flow its course to you

my actions stand alone benign

for what else could it do

if anyone could read my mind

pray tell me what it means

the only solace that i can find

forever written in my dreams

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Comments:
Comment By: Freejoey on June 17, 2012 06:25:58 AM Report
Very good like your flow and style. intelligent and well thought out.
Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on June 14, 2012 06:25:04 PM Report
I must concur with both Lady D and David here. This is an exceptional piece and I for one would love to know what I would find!



~KD~

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on June 14, 2012 10:14:31 AM Report
As always you are a dependable writer.  Your poems are even and have your own special style.  Good stuff, Darren.  --David
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 14, 2012 08:46:20 AM Report
Hi Darren:  I enjoyed this write.  Love the title.  



Lady D





 


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