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Author Name: Premiumtinadee 7 Comments
Date Added: June 11, 2012 21:06:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Shared Desire~

~Shared Desire~

With desire,
Full of passion.
Strong hands longing to caress my soft skin.
Two hearts racing faster than time itself.
Deeply burning,
Is our skin.
Total release, hearts stop, bodies collapse.
A brief moment in time between lovers.
A desire
We both shared,

Author's Notes:
TetractysTetractys, a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10syllables (total of 20). Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1. Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1Triple Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
And so on....... This has four
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Comment By: FreeHenry M. on June 12, 2012 06:25:27 PM Report
Very steamy and sensual Tina, this got the motor running!   Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 12, 2012 03:18:25 PM Report
Nicely done Tina, this is neat!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 12, 2012 11:38:49 AM Report

Hope ... This is jsut a very romantic steamy poem that breatsh with passion...

 great to have you the new name.... Without Hope we are nothing.....

 Love ya! ~ India

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on June 12, 2012 09:00:38 AM Report
This form is beautiful and you use it perfectly.  It is amazing how a form can be inspiring to us.  I really appreciate good forms...  but am afraid this one is -- well -- beyond me!  Thank God we have you to write it for us!  --David
Comment By: PremiumShirls on June 12, 2012 08:34:48 AM Report

Well done Tina. Very steamy and my kind of poetry. :)



Comment By: FreeTomahawk on June 12, 2012 07:36:01 AM Report

This form of poetry reminds me of Fibonacci poetry, albeit, not quite the same concept. Very sensual and steamy, well done.



Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 12, 2012 04:21:04 AM Report
Well whatever form this is written in one thing for certain is its passionate,erotic and complies whole heartedly with the title,I could feel my skin flushing along with the pace,well done Tina~Graham.


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