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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 14 Comments
Date Added: August 08, 2012 11:08:44 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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NOW IS A MIRROR



NOW IS A MIRROR

Now is a mirror
Reflection defines:
What was yet is.

The past exists:
Its dull color
Its fractured lines

Twisted yet mix...
Dividing times.
Always pointless.

Remains error.



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Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on August 10, 2012 06:29:04 PM Report
I did not fully understand this, but when I looked into it, on reflection I was staggered by the imigary here. A great work Sir.    Bill H
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 10, 2012 03:55:07 PM Report
Einstien said that past, present and future all exist at the same time. We tend to think of time in linier terms, like a flowing river. Maybe it's more like an ocean. All the ocean exists all the time. We just experience glimpses of it like a ship sailing the sea.There are times I suspect that there's a lot about reality I don't understand... len
Comment By: PremiumShawn on August 10, 2012 08:01:00 AM Report

Undeniably true. Beautiful.

Shawn

Comment By: PremiumShirls on August 9, 2012 08:39:36 PM Report

This is Excellent David. I enjoyed reading.

 

Shirls

Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on August 9, 2012 10:45:45 AM Report
with the past and the present always looking back back at us reflecting through and through somewhere in the near future though still flawed but yet hopefully hopefelt and artistically and passionately better. imperfections is what adds color so long as the colors don't all run together and turn dark and black. very nice write. can inspire so many thoughts and feelings here. Always maggie.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 8, 2012 12:32:11 PM Report
Ah yes, the hall of mirrors in my Life.  Ever there, ever remembering, ever challenging me to move onward. 



Lady D

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on June 11, 2012 07:29:13 PM Report
David
I am now convinced there is certainly no present.  You've written the wonderfully.

Love

Tina

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 6, 2012 02:34:16 PM Report

Another simple but insightful piece Dave, NICE! Joe


Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on June 6, 2012 12:10:13 PM Report
I am beginning to believe that you weren't simply touched by a muse, but swallowed her whole! 
Your simple phrases provide such incredible insight my friend, you're amazing!




~KD~

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on June 6, 2012 07:03:24 AM Report
There are times when I just have to sit back in awe -- the writing here is exquisite -- dare I say almost musical in phrase -- dear sir I must profess to being enchanted by your write --



Alistair

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 6, 2012 05:57:26 AM Report
If you face a blank wall and imagine its a mirror what you see is only what you want to see unfortunately when faced with the real thing some still will only see what they want as with an anorexic they still see a fat person  the mind is a complex thing is it not David an insightful poem once again my friend ~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 5, 2012 05:46:29 PM Report


Sometimes we just have to look into a mirror to really see whats important in our faded lives..

I love this one my dear....Friend ~ Love India

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on June 5, 2012 03:02:47 PM Report
"Now is a mirror".... So true, we look at our reflections and reflect, we do our soulsearching as we gaze past the reflection and into what could have been. Excellent poem David, very thought provoking.   Henry
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on June 5, 2012 10:52:11 AM Report


Now is the time we live in, it shows us what is, not what was, or what shall be. Now is what we should "reflect" on....nothing more. Cheers, Fireguy!


 


Len





 


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