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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: April 20, 2012 16:04:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Bitter Cold Atmosphere
The trusting bloom of my foolish heart
is now gone with my lost youth


My wisdom cheeks are now so very pale
with several heartaches from the past
can anyone really see the proof

~**~

He dazzled my sable eyes with lying eyes
my only mortal weakness
was him who wanted
a younger lover


My long dark lashes now wet 
with humiliation shock
 I soon discovered 

~**~

Hold back the melting bitter darkness
and clutch the misery dawn
with more mortal coldness
 to somehow explain


Stop the world and change the dreams
so you no longer whisper their name



When coldness wraps the suffering day
don't let the rain clouds get in the way 

~**~

 Now just a frown on the atmosphere
all who now reads..... who even cares 

 To fall in love again...
Not Me ....
Not even on a dare....

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Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on April 22, 2012 07:33:41 AM Report

To fall in love again...

Not Me ....

Not even on a dare....






That, my dear, is one of the stupidest statements I've ever seen you write.

You are too nice a person not to even seek love in your life.

Don't you believe it.  Love is out there for you

Gene

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on April 21, 2012 09:45:59 AM Report
Well -- even as a man -- I have to agree that most men are untrustworthy.  They are dishonest and liars -- and they don't have any idea of the real roots or dynamics of their psychological and social problems -- which they don't even see as problems.  How hard is it to be a good man?  It's easy.  And it's so much better.  There is something terribly wrong.  i have few real brothers.  --David
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 21, 2012 09:22:57 AM Report
Such a sad write.  Men can be such an adventure -- good, bad, ugly !!!   
They truly are often so undeserving of a truly good loving woman.   

positive thoughts your way and love




Lady D -- always thinking of her beautiful Texas friend She Whispers 




Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on April 21, 2012 03:10:54 AM Report
Such a sad piece -- you are a genius at expressive writing -- you emote - - you evoke...This is truly magnificent --



Alistair

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on April 20, 2012 05:07:38 PM Report


Well, I'll tell you, I always prefered the company of older women, they got it goin' on. The young ones, with some exceptions, can't hold a candle.


 


Len





 


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