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Author Name: Freerandy johnson 1 Comments
Date Added: March 23, 2012 21:03:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
The punishment doesn't fit the crime
You got really mad and gave my cat away.
I'll be bitter at you for the rest of my days.
I played hooky and you punished me for that mistake.
Does it give you pleasure to see your son's heart break?
In this case, the punishment doesn't fit the crime.
Even if I try, my wounds will not be healed by time.
My pain and tears should affect you but they do not.
My cat was my friend and what you did hurts a lot.
I'm sure that one day it will be something that you'll regret.
It was a cruel thing to do to give away a little boy's pet.
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Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on March 24, 2012 08:51:33 AM Report
Fictional or not, it has impact.  But where did you ever get the idea from?  Must be something that triggered it.  It must be a similar feeling to what we go through when we die.  God has given us life, and then He takes it back.   But that is not the end of life, bur rather  the beginning of a new and better life.  OK   I'll get off my soap box now.  Neat poem
Gene





 


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