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Author Name: Freedazriz 1 Comments
Date Added: March 17, 2012 15:03:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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day one i feel you leaving
a void left in your place

day two im still believing
my phone on just in case

day three im growing weaker
as i long to hear your voice

day four my days get deeper
as sleeps my numbing choice

day five i see your face
every time i close my eyes

day six my fears replaced
my thoughts turn to the sky

day seven my hearts pulsating
as i long for your return

day eight theres no more waiting
for your love ill die to earn
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Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on March 18, 2012 09:45:02 AM Report
Beautiful sad poem.  But still easy to read.  Brilliant idea -- it reminds me of the biblical story of creation...  --David


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