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Author Name: FreeHcivolmra 3 Comments
Date Added: March 04, 2012 11:03:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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Dreams of the Fallen
Fragments of memories
flash through the
dark silvery mist,
images manifest randomly,
love injected with pain,
war implanted with fear.
 
A scene flares into brilliance,
two skyclad mortals
entwined upon a bed,
breathing in the scent
of lavender and sweat,
whispering immortal words
of eternal love.
 
Reflections of memories
silently scream into existance,
dipicting graphic details
of panic, pain, and strife,
creating a panorama
of a dark beauty
so exquisitely breathtaking,
it pulls us into
the Dreams of the Fallen
Author's Notes:
Was looking at pictures emailed with a story of a friends grandfather who served in World War II.
Was also listening to a song called "Green Fields of France" by Dropkick Murphys
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 21, 2012 07:07:19 PM Report
I think he would have enjoyed this poem very much.....
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on March 4, 2012 12:36:11 PM Report
A moving tableau of images depicting life in turmoil -- another solid and entertaining piece of prose which held me from start to finish.  Enjoyed it very much



Alistair

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on March 4, 2012 12:07:30 PM Report
Terrific A-B-A form -- the middle (B) serves as a release from the tension of the two 'A' sections on the extremes.  [This kind of analysis comes from studying 'form' in music.]  A very dramatic piece.  Brilliant.  --D




 


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