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Author Name: FreeHcivolmra 3 Comments
Date Added: March 02, 2012 20:03:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: EMO Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Deeper, Darker
deeper, darker, we move through time,
sleeper, dreamer, we hate to rhyme.
look down, see us stand,
black on black, even on the sand.
a strobe of white, pale as a ghost,
pierces, tattoos, we hate everyone the most.
black hair, black eyes,
her hair, smoothed and spiked,
a better mohawk than the guy's.
 
deeper, darker, black on black,
sleeper, dreamer, nightmares in your back.
Author's Notes:
.... I dont know what its supposed to be about.....
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 3, 2012 08:27:03 PM Report
We all write and sometimes just don't know why!!! But there it is!!!
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on March 3, 2012 10:34:47 AM Report
There is an almost 'nursery-rhyme' quality to this poem.  Despite the attempt of the words, I don't find it at all negative -- rather, the rhythm and tempo give it a song-like face that no words can undo.  Very interesting accomplishment.  As always, unique.   --David
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on March 3, 2012 10:20:26 AM Report
Sometimes something finds its own meaning for each reader -- free-flowing rhyme and rhythm -- pretty words



Alistair





 


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