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Author Name: FreeMoon Fairy 11 Comments
Date Added: February 29, 2012 01:02:49 Average Score: Not Shared
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Nature Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Sunlit Patterns
Sunlit Patterns

Sunlight beaming softly through
Emerald green,lacy floral curtains
Projecting outlines upon the wall
                     Causing the eye to be mistaken.

Four elf owls perched upon a branch
Congregating silently
Rays of light intensify
                     As morning slowly awakens.

Moments quickly pass
Sunlit patterns begin to disperse
Quickly without a trace
                     Leaving quietly as they appeared.


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*repost of older write*
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 25, 2015 06:45:50 AM Report


I love Nature poetry.


This is Excellent Expression.


Yours .............Fletch

Comment By: PremiumMerv on June 5, 2012 06:53:51 PM Report

Your words bring out the thoughts you wish to express in a very wonderful way. Enjoyed the first read. The second read etc

Very well done in my view

Merv

Comment By: FreeMichelle on March 1, 2012 11:13:34 PM Report


I love how you coonect with nature and describe what we rarely seen in this world!


Michelle

Comment By: FreeKory on March 1, 2012 11:12:25 AM Report
I closed my eyes after I read this and I was right there.  Thank you for the beautiful imagery. Great poem.



-Kory

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on February 29, 2012 10:01:56 PM Report


you can bring a writers and his pen out of hibernation..


you have it all imagery flow and rhyme


running a course thru ones mind

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on February 29, 2012 07:22:26 PM Report
You give such a beautiful vision with your words Traci, it is so good to see you posting, I hope you are well.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on February 29, 2012 12:44:54 PM Report


...this is one of those poems in the catagory, "wish I had written this".  Yes, I see what you see...but I will trade 2 of my purple finches for 2 of your elfin owls; perched upon a branch.  I saw 2 quails this morning marching on the upper wall and a roadrunner made a rare appearance a couple of weeks ago.


Your poem is a delight. I love it!  Looking forward to many more.  Welcome back!

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 29, 2012 08:55:46 AM Report
Lovely write -- made my morning; it is foggy/misty at my place and your delicate write makes me smile.
Happy to see you writing again.  Take care, dear Friend. 




Lady D

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 29, 2012 08:32:44 AM Report
Our apartment faces south and west -- so i have no picture idea of the beauty and interesting patterns you describe...  But you gave me a good idea of what they're like:  thanks!  --David
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 29, 2012 04:14:22 AM Report
I've seen these patterns many times myself and find them fascinating, I would say to my wife can you see that face reflected on the wall and she would invariably say no,so I think its all in the eye of the beholder what we perceive others may not,excellent writing as always ~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShajeea on February 29, 2012 03:35:36 AM Report
That's nice! I also love the sunrise and sometimes I get up very early, specially to take pictures and look at the sun rising. Great poem by the way. I enjoyed it.




 


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