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Author Name: Freependeriki 5 Comments
Date Added: February 23, 2012 13:02:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Tall Ship
We will sail a Tall Ship
down the rising mists of morning
Beyond the bar of shining sand
and take a hard running tide
to the sun kissed waters
There we will raise high sail
For the rising wind...
and the wild ocean wide

A course set and held
to a high arcing star
We will steer our course
through silvered waves
to clear water
Feeling cant of deck
and roll of wave
in slanting Moonlight

and oh.....what adventures wait
beyond the dawn's horizon
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on February 25, 2012 07:52:10 PM Report
This really needs to be under romance, for how would set sail without the person they love. Superbly written.  May you and yours have a wonderful journey under the majestic star filled skies to arise to the the awe and beauty of the sun.
Tina

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 25, 2012 06:01:10 PM Report


So many years that man is destroying our oceans now.... its not as beautiful as before.

.what a waste...there is magic in the oceans waves....

I just posted a poem you might like to comment on its for you since you love the sea so much...

HOpe you enjoy it?

Texas  Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 23, 2012 03:09:59 PM Report
But alas, those days are gone but to our dreams.  Clear water?  Slivered waves?  Gone to the oil tankers and radio-active, mercury lined fishes.  Ah, but the romance of your poem wants me to help it all come back.  Tall ships?   well...... maybe back then.    OK OK enough with reality.  I want to go back into your poem to live.  Those were the beautiful days as is your poem.
Gene

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 23, 2012 03:08:59 PM Report
But alas, those days are gone but to our dreams.  Clear water?  Slivered waves?  Gone to the oil tankers and radio-active, mercury lined fishes.  Ah, but the romance of your poem wants me to help it all come back.  Tall ships?   well...... maybe back then.    OK OK enough with reality.  I want to go back into your poem to live.  Those were the beautiful days as is your poem.
Gene

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 23, 2012 01:14:40 PM Report
Beautiful poem.  Words and lines roll like ocean waves.  Love it.  --David




 


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