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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 5 Comments
Date Added: February 19, 2012 23:02:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I curiously wondered
 
We really had to say a little less than too much

I curiously wondered while you certainly wanted

Donít just tell me who you thought you were

Tell me everything I will let some slowly slip away

You are not alone so come and dream with me

Staring at a body standing naked moving with time

No longer hidden where love ends and trouble begins

A strange thing happens and turns me your way 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 3, 2012 08:42:09 AM Report
Like!  Very nice. Still have the touch Steve. 
Nice to read you again.

Adri 

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 20, 2012 10:54:57 PM Report

"Donít just tell me who you thought you were ..."

No one ever knows for sure who they are in another's eyes. Least of all ourselves.  we put forth what we believe the other person wants to see in ourselves, but we do not see through the same bigotries and teachings that they have received.

This is very beautifully written

Gene

Comment By: FreeDean on February 20, 2012 03:52:40 PM Report
Enjoyed this as it shows a complex aspect of love in all of us. Sometimes we become confused if we really love a person or everything has ended for good. Well written, ~Dean


Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on February 20, 2012 06:18:53 AM Report
I enjoyed this very much indeed -- the implied is subtle and the revealing of one's own true persona is thoughtfully expressed here -- a nice write



Alistair

Comment By: FreeLubaina on February 20, 2012 04:38:05 AM Report
Good work! This poem is to the point, as well, as it is emotionally expressive to those of its audience




 


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