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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 6 Comments
Date Added: February 16, 2012 10:02:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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WALK SLOWLY WORDS UNTO MY MIND
b’’h
2/4/12



WALK SLOWLY WORDS UNTO MY MIND


Walk slowly words unto my mind —
Tho’ be I ready for your call —
Still wait must I until you find
Your time amid the tides of All.

No chance can I control your ways —
You listen not to any plea —
Nor heed you invitation says —
And bare arrive before you flee.

Then chase you not I will — I swear —
It’s you who choose this childish game —
So hide and see if so I care —
That you will wish you’d known my name.





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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on February 17, 2012 08:34:40 AM Report
everything i do lately must be done slowly, wonderful writing David


Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on February 17, 2012 04:34:03 AM Report
A delicate and tender expression of pure feelings, which might capture the heart of the readers, as well as someone special, for whom this gorgeous piece has been created  :  )
Comment By: Freenoah count on February 17, 2012 12:30:57 AM Report
I can almost hear a British accent.  Nicely done.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 16, 2012 06:17:04 PM Report


Interesting  sachet  of words .... I like it .. walk slowly unto my mind....

 This brings to mind two meanings....of this poem...

 Love ~ India ~She

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on February 16, 2012 02:05:21 PM Report


Yeah....what he said! lol. Well done, Fireman.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on February 16, 2012 12:19:08 PM Report
An eloquent and beauteous exploration of writer's block and one with which I can totally empathise.  An elegant poem full of marvellous language and form -- superb



Alistair





 


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