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Author Name: FreeHcivolmra 2 Comments
Date Added: January 28, 2012 19:01:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Violet Storm
losing focus and form,
our essence bleeds out
during the violet storm.
amaranthine amethyst light
scintillates with a dark brilliance
that illuminates the night.
 
losing form and focus,
our minds stripped bare
from the frenzy of the locust,
our nature dissipating
into the deepening maelstrom
as we begin anticipating
the ever changing future.
 
mauve rain glistens
on the eaves
while we listen
to the retreating violet storm,
watching the purple lightning
illuminate our dull lives.
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 28, 2012 07:39:28 PM Report
A spectacular write -- vivid - - vibrant imagery that paints a picture that the mind holds for so very long.  An eloquent - - evocative opus



Alistair

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 28, 2012 07:23:10 PM Report
What a fine poem!  I am not at all sure what it means -- yes, parts of it -- but not the Whole.  That will take me many more readings -- am slow in that department...  Nevertheless I hear the incredible language, the phrases, the crystalline words -- and i am amazed: especially with the raw cadence!  Great poem, john.  --David 




 


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