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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 11 Comments
Date Added: January 24, 2012 08:01:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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HOW SIMPLE SEEM DAYS THAT ARE GONE
bh
1/23/12


HOW SIMPLE SEEM DAYS THAT ARE GONE


How simple seem days that are gone!
Like pages once turned they are past!
No longer to leave us again
Their being neer meaning to last.

In telling the truth well we know
As soon as a moment is done
It was in fact only to go
And will not return once its gone.

No magic will eer bring it back
No song to be sung will it call
Tho substance and presence it lack
Define somehow that which is all.

Would that it color not this time!
Could scape we its persistent wail!
Despite its departure its crime:
Yet cover our dreams with its veil.




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on January 29, 2012 10:04:26 PM Report
Excellent subject, to some extent we live in yesterday, today and tomorrow.
Comment By: FreeDean on January 26, 2012 05:00:53 AM Report
Metre perfect, resonating a voice inside you - even more perfect - like that  you telling you, you know what's gone - and not let'm go again. ~Dean
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 25, 2012 09:14:45 AM Report
Whether looking back on the past with fondness or regret, memories are what sustains us and they help to mold the people we become. Great writing David.    Henry
Comment By: FreeJohn Armlovich on January 25, 2012 08:09:15 AM Report


this is very good, while yesterday is gone and tomorrow we die, today we live and we will live forever in the memories of our friends and family. great job,


John

Comment By: Freenoah count on January 25, 2012 01:57:55 AM Report


Some poets have a knack for garnering good comments, which is a dead give-away for either talent or sycophancy ( in this case, it's absolutely the former).  Their work may or may not be published in prestigious forums, but for right now, right here... it resonates.  Keep resonating, you got my ear.  n  


Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on January 24, 2012 10:10:14 PM Report
We get to spend but one life on this earth.  We need to spend it well, because you are right... we will never get it back.  I feel pity for those who write sorrowful poems.  They are focusing on the wrong things.  They need to focus on what blessings we have, not the sorrows.  Spend your time well my friend.  We can't live on credit.
Gene

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on January 24, 2012 03:19:05 PM Report


"Yesterday's a cancelled check, tomorrow's a promisory note, today is all the money we have, so let's spend it wisely"--Art Rust Jr. Well done, Fireman.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAeon Onopka on January 24, 2012 01:17:39 PM Report
So very beautiful. All I can think about are promises I've made to myself that yesterdays are in the past and things will change. Thank you for the write.c


Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 24, 2012 11:59:26 AM Report
Beautifully written -- lovely rhyme scheme and metre.  The past for me is something I actually would rather forget but sometimes a peek is enough to look forward to the future.  Lovely write



Alistair

Comment By: FreeRakesh Ashokan on January 24, 2012 11:17:14 AM Report


nice work,i always wish i could have gone back in past, in my childhood once again.but i dont think it's gone happen , i always like the way you choose the subject of your poem.


 


~rakz 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 24, 2012 10:09:48 AM Report


The past is the past...still with vivid memories..but we can't go back.

.only ahead is the lighted pathway.... JUst a wonderful poem that reaches out!!!

 Never stop writing I feel you so much...

 Always ~ She Whispers





 


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