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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 7 Comments
Date Added: January 23, 2012 17:01:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Speechless ...
Water waves ripples and slaps their
glittering arms out before me
extending their ceremonial
understanding reverenc
e



Loneliness became suddenly empty air
just drifting like a lifeless cloud

with no destiny direction 

~**~


The immortal heavens
were speechless


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Comments:
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on January 24, 2012 06:12:42 PM Report
I'm ...............................
Gene

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 24, 2012 02:13:20 PM Report
'The immortal heavens were speechless...' -- what a moving line from a peaceful poem -- exquisite



Alistair

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 24, 2012 12:16:00 PM Report
Love the last stanza !!!!  Your always EXCELLENT creativity.........



Lady D

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 24, 2012 08:38:51 AM Report
I am speechless!  Why should I speak!  You speak so so very elegantly!  Love, David
Comment By: FreeDean on January 24, 2012 04:27:15 AM Report
Indeed She, loneliness and the rest ... , beautifully expressed. ~Dean
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on January 23, 2012 06:37:54 PM Report


For some, this is the only way out.


 


Len

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on January 23, 2012 06:01:06 PM Report


Priceless






 


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