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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: January 11, 2012 16:01:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Who Has Broken .....Who
Seems he fumbled with silent words
with no confessions to reply
as time goes slowly on now
I understand why 

~*~

 When he slapped me in the face
with more of his endless lies 


He may have broken my foolish heart 
but in the long run I broke more of him
I broke his stubborn pride
I wonder if he cries

~*~

I have learned to eat my pain
like sweet delicious candy
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on January 15, 2012 03:12:57 AM Report
wow! great poem..............as usual


Comment By: FreeTim on January 13, 2012 09:14:49 PM Report
I like the metaphors you've painted with your sword of a pen. Your end stanza tells a story in itself. A great poem as usual. It's good to see the writings of an old friend again as well. :)
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on January 12, 2012 12:09:02 PM Report


You showed your mettle, gave it back to him....let him know you're there! Good show, Scarlett! <3


 


Len

Comment By: FreeDean on January 12, 2012 04:57:23 AM Report
Long term relationships are bound to have many difficult ups and downs. Most of them just naturally grow apart. Seems a secret play of mother nature ... ~Dean




 


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