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Author Name: Freependeriki 6 Comments
Date Added: January 09, 2012 06:01:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Down to the Sea
My love..my love
let us carry our love
these relics of trust between us
let us make a journey
down to the sea
let our steps ring lightly
on these cascades of green
this tapestry caught
on the warm balms
of this shining morning

You turn and I am lost
in deep emerald eyes
where miracles of light
shine from your soul
A lost memory stirs
of the lovelorm times
before you came
on a secret wind
Where I stood forlorn
in deep shadows of night

And we have sang
melodies on the wind
down all these days
of our gathered lives
We have been one
and held together
our souls
so my ever love
let us make our way
onward to the sea


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 9, 2012 04:44:28 PM Report


Thomas...once again.... Love at its best....

 Walking down to the sea with your lovely woman with deep emerald eyes

I know she must be a beauty...I enjoy your love poems I think the beat there so romantic..

 I will send you a word bank tonight or tomorrow... I have two day soff!!

 Always ~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeDean on January 9, 2012 03:24:28 PM Report
Let's have a round to love, truly, soul-to-soul, "onward to the sea"
Loved it wholeheartedly, ~Dean 

Comment By: FreeJoshua M on January 9, 2012 07:58:59 AM Report
Lovely write, especially the final stanza which was mesmerizing to say the very least!


Comment By: FreeJoshua M on January 9, 2012 07:58:27 AM Report



Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 9, 2012 07:35:54 AM Report
well done Thomas, great writing


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 9, 2012 06:40:42 AM Report
A beautiful love poem full of lovely images and soft colours.  Easy-to-read, not-too-long, well-crafted.  Thanks for a special song!  --David




 


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