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Author Name: Freerandy johnson 2 Comments
Date Added: December 21, 2011 11:12:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
Eternal love
I want to tell you that I love you before my death.
I need you to know how I feel before I take my final breath.
I was unable to tell you those three words before.
I'm telling you now because we won't be together anymore.
I just got shot in the back by your insane dad.
Dying doesn't scare me but being parted from you makes me sad.
Not being able to become your husband is something that I seriously regret.
I want you to go on with your life but I hope our love is something you won't forget.
Please remember these final words that are true.
We will be parted but for all eternity I will love you.
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Comment By: PremiumDean on December 21, 2011 06:42:30 PM Report
Randy, what a sad poem. Hope it is only a poem, but knowing you write about some true life experiences, it scares me. You love for your lady seems eternal.
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on December 21, 2011 01:51:42 PM Report
What a sad tale - - but beautifully expressed.  I particularly enjoyed the rhyming scheme and the flow is excellent.  Bravo poet - - 

Alistair Muir


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