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Author Name: Freependeriki 2 Comments
Date Added: December 17, 2011 15:12:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Religious Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I AM
I am the weaver of dreams
across a moonless night
I am the one who
pierced a placid soul
and brought forth
ecstacy

I am the one who stepped
across a desert dark
I am the one who
joined with those who saw
and brought forth
saviours

I am the one who sang
down a summer wind
I am the one who
raised a single chorus high
and brought forth
anthems

I am the one who wrote
on vellums hard and bright
I am the one who
gave forth simple teachings
and brought forth
understanding

I am the one who saw
the dark thoughts elevation
I am the one who
whispered to the wayward
and brought forth
redemption

I am..........

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeChris B on December 17, 2011 04:18:10 PM Report
Nice powerful reflection. One quick critique...I appreciate the lack of punctuation, and I think the ending would be a bit more powerful had you continued that format.



Nice write,




Chris

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 17, 2011 03:56:54 PM Report


I am in awe!!! Every verse more powerful than the last....

 Amazing how you speak out in whispered words with such depth and understand ...

 I Am..... You  are just brilliant with the langusge words of story telling in your poems..

 Thank you once more for your talent to shine through in poetic style...

 Always ~ She Whispers (( Scarlett





 


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