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Date Added: November 15, 2011 14:11:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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THEN SHALL WE TRAVEL NOT THAT WAY?
THEN SHALL WE TRAVEL NOT THAT WAY?


"Then shall we travel not that way
Our destination guarantee
As all-but-promised destiny ?
Nor shall we travel not that way
To glimpse but once how Heaven lay ?
What miracle? What mystery?
What spectral sky? Celestial sea?
Would God such journey turn away?

"God hears us, child all all we ask
But gives us not for earthly task
To prate of angel Heaven see
Far greater labor gives us He:
To work for Peace for Peace to pray...
Then shall we travel not that way?



_______________________
Firestone Feinberg 2008
Author's Notes:
David's wonderful inspiring words and my healing voice.  Thank you David for letting me record this one.  I just love this poem  Tina
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 10, 2012 01:47:33 PM Report
Beautiful words with a very classic feel. The reading was perfect....gentle, but very moving...len
Comment By: FreeAmmar on November 28, 2011 11:24:51 AM Report
A wonderful sonnet. Indeed, travelling 'that way' is certainly a 'greater labor' than any other. The final lines leave a real mark upon me.
Peace, Ammar

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on November 15, 2011 03:37:14 PM Report
An incredible collaboration, loved the subject matter and the questions asked. You blend very well.   Henry
Comment By: FreeDean on November 15, 2011 02:26:01 PM Report



WOW, a wonderful voice for a wonderful read.



This is what the C-P should be about. Enjoyed it immensely.




Congratulations Tina & David, once again





 


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