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Comment By:  Leonard Wilson on December 27, 2012 12:36:41 PM |
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Such a trippy poem, David.. :o)...len
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| Comment By: Brian Dziokonski on December 27, 2012 12:14:27 PM |
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I really like your poem David! Something that for a moment seems so simple, and then so many other possibilities come to mind. To say something simple and really make it work is an art. For at the core of the most simple lies the profound and you have a knack for expressing that well. Happy New Year, Brian.
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| Comment By: Brian Dziokonski on December 27, 2012 12:13:50 PM |
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I really like your poem David! Something that for a moment seems so simple, and then so many other possibilities come to mind. To say something simple and really make it work is an art. For at the core of the most simple lies the profound and you have a knack for expressing that well. Happy New Year, Brian.
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| Comment By: Pelagic Mind on December 27, 2012 09:01:47 AM |
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Some say its the journey, not the destination. In this piece you call into question the method. Literature depends on the method "how we get there" and in most good literature they get there by themselves! A simple piece that has some interesting connotations.
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Comment By:  Harry William Harborne on December 26, 2012 05:56:23 AM |
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It matters not how we travel but whether we can squeeze a poem out of it. Much enjoyed. Bill
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Comment By:  Henry M. on December 25, 2012 09:07:08 PM |
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When you go on the trip by yourself David, I hope you come back with more great ideas for writes like this one! Henry
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| Comment By: Mary on December 28, 2011 06:16:42 PM |
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wow i love this poem i even love the recording it makes it worth reading
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| Comment By: HOPE on November 16, 2011 10:27:50 AM |
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David, The recording of this makes it seem more sorrowful than when I read it the first time. I didn't get that feeling. Your recording and reading of it makes the journey seem lonesome. Tina
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| Comment By: HOPE on November 14, 2011 06:23:54 PM |
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David, A lovely poem. Sometimes taking a trip alone is fun but sometimes taking it with other can be quite enjoyable too. Tina
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| Comment By: Steve on October 22, 2011 09:26:29 PM |
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Nicely written, your words became a journey.
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| Comment By: e. Gene Myers on October 8, 2011 09:32:22 PM |
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I used to feel that way. Then I met my wife. Now ...I'd change the "I" to "we" It would be a much better trip especially if the we was someone you loved. Last word would have to be "Together" Much more fun that way. Try it. You may like it.
Gene
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| Comment By: She Whispers on October 8, 2011 06:38:56 PM |
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Sometimes we just have to be >>>Alone!!
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