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Author Name: Freehnk903 7 Comments
Date Added: October 02, 2011 11:10:45 Average Score: Not Shared
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Type: Rhyming
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Just one look
It only took one look Into her loving eyes All pretentions were stripped She broke down every disguise   His soul was laid bare When she rained kisses on his lips Each moment of anticipation Heightened by wandering fingertips   Together they scaled the mountain To heavenly delights Mutual passion the very cause Of many sleepless nights   They stayed lost within each other Abandoning all inhibition Their fate to be as one Love came to full fruition
Author's Notes:
Call me a romantic, hopeless or hopeful, but I believe in love at first sight!
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 23, 2015 08:49:04 PM Report

There's no half way when it comes to love, a person is either all in or all out. To be lost within each other is the best feeling EVER!

How very romantic!

~Barbara D. 
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on October 3, 2011 02:05:24 PM Report

Love at first sight

For me took flight.

Henry this goes beyond what most people believe.

This makes me to wonder if this is more then contrive.


Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on October 2, 2011 02:54:20 PM Report
Well done Henry, this is very good romantic writing

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on October 2, 2011 02:22:01 PM Report
it might take a little more time than "just one look into her loving eyes"...but wow!!! do we ever see the sparks fly in this romantic piece!!  lovely and passion filled as well...Loved it!! 
Comment By: FreesHeRi on October 2, 2011 01:14:17 PM Report
A always-a lovely write henry! (((hugs))
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on October 2, 2011 11:39:22 AM Report

Poignant, Henry, you have a way with words that transcends face value. Well done.



Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 2, 2011 11:37:37 AM Report
Henry, You are and I'm sure of it a hopeless romantic.  To feel this way is amazing,  this line moves and scares me the most...

"They stayed lost within each other"

The trust to believe your heart will be safe, is for me, a huge leap into the unknown.  Tina


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