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Author Name: Freesophnibbs9 2 Comments
Date Added: July 06, 2011 05:07:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Observances Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Going No Where
In this old town sometimes it feels like your going no where.
You lay awake at night looking at the ceiling with a cold blank stare.
Nothing seems to matter but, power and status.
No one looks at other perspectives so their views and judgments are always bias.

When you ask for help here no one reaches out a hand.
Nothing is asked for but, everything is wanted on demand.
To ask for help these days is seen as using someone.
With selfishness though everything will become undone.

Anger takes over so many youths minds with no one to show them how to be happy.
When mom and dad give them everything they don't know how to be anything but, greedy.
In this town it feels like no matter what path you take, your stuck.
On every corner and street there is people causing havoc.

The people who could help don't want to.
They would rather stand around and argue.
If you think your right with some people your being judgmental.
They don't understand that abuse isn't just physical but, it can be mental.

No one deserves to be belittled and made to feel like their nothing.
In this town no one is bluffing.
People here steal, kill, and lie to cover up the lives they are ashamed of.
Yet no one stops to think they could rise above.

One day a road will be taken and you'll never look back.
All you'll see of that town is a flashback.
So for once you can go some where.
As long as it's anywhere but, here.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on July 6, 2011 11:44:12 AM Report


Very good peice of work - as Dirk asya, not the kind of place you'd like to be, but really strong, well written poem.  The title attracted me to it for some reason - it sounded like the kind of stuff I like to write -  and on reading it I wasn't dissapointed.


 


Kevin

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on July 6, 2011 05:58:08 AM Report
wow sounds like a sad place 2 stay - very well written poem , though






 


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